Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/2/21, 4:22 AM
Would have been hot to read about manager Chad and the two cops, but it was suggestive enough that my imagination did the rest. Eagerly looking forward to the finale!
Oddballs
2/2/21, 4:21 AM
@Evelded: Thinking on that, I think I might actually could have that arranged - Aaron getting revenge I mean. I'm getting a handful of possibilities here from the thought. As for the Consensual tag, I only added it because while he's a gay cartoon, Aaron has a different mindset altogether. Idk if that was a good enough notion though.
Anonymous
2/2/21, 4:03 AM
this was a great story. very hot, cant wait for more.
2/2/21, 3:57 AM
Oh my God, that was EXQUISITE. The gorgeous descriptive language makes the whole scene feel real, and the muscle growth and mental transformations as the narrator slowly gets bigger and sexier...I had to hold back from spilling all over my jeans. THANK YOU. This is phenomenal! Now to find a magic suit like that... ;p
2/2/21, 3:34 AM
Honestly, I want Aaron to get revenge. Also, I'm baffled that this has a consensual tag
2/2/21, 3:20 AM
The theme and game mechanics are great. I have no doubt that chapter 3 will be even better than its predecessors. One small note: you and Baralai both write excellent turn-based board game stories, and both of you struggle with articulating the stereotypical "gay accent." It's not a thtandard lithp. If anything, it'ss a hyper-ssibilansse. It'ss an exssageration of the 'esss' sssound.
Feb 1, 2021
2/2/21, 3:09 AM
hot concept.
2/2/21, 2:24 AM
Grew up in the fan, my heart is in the James, but sadly I don't live in town anymore. The local references were just my little way of showing love for my beloved hometown. when it's safe to do so, I'd be down to meet up while visiting my family (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
2/2/21, 1:53 AM
I didn't read the description so that is my fault.
CigarMuscle
2/2/21, 1:11 AM
Fantastic work!. I recognized the location of the story well. I'm a local here. Buzz me.