Recent Comments

Martin
2/1/21, 8:40 PM
I thought this story is hot as hell. People's lives are fucked with in many stories, this is not much different. And the obliviousness to the hypnotic control while he's fully aware of it, is great!
hypnosub
2/1/21, 8:13 PM
the heat is ramping up! i love that the hotter the story gets, the more political it gets too. i really appreciated that smart and subtle political undertones and love how they're becoming more apparent the more chads appear
2/1/21, 8:12 PM
Absolutely wonderful. I would love to see what the other suits do too!
hypnosub
2/1/21, 8:00 PM
this story is getting even better! i thoroughly love this delicate balance you've struck between sexy and horror. i feel you're teasing the audience JUST enough to give them hints of what's going to happen, but you go about it in such a cool and unexpected way! also, aw! thank you, @Hypnothrill for recommending my series! i'm blushing at your compliments lol
hypnosub
2/1/21, 7:54 PM
i'm just catching up on this story and i love it! the slow burn style of it is phenomenal and leaves me wanting more - a great quality in a story! i can't wait to see everyone turn into hot chads lol
Jan 31, 2021
boi98229
2/1/21, 6:46 PM
i have never really imagined myself a top and certainly never an Alpha. Still i really felt that shift in power. That feeling of seduction and submission was incredibly hot. Even when i get really aroused by a story, i still don't get off, just really really horny. Most of the time getting hot and horny is enough, but this story had me powering nonstop through all those "Sir, yes, sir"s and stroking hard just like that pussy Total Top! Thanks so much! Great story!
2/1/21, 6:04 PM
has become a favorite story, hope there is a part 2 in the works.
Jan 3, 2021
Tranceguy
2/1/21, 5:08 PM
Hot story Man! I can fully imagine how Tom stared on the screen and can't look away until he was transformed to gay. Go ahead! :-)
2/1/21, 4:37 PM
I agree with the above comments that this is a well-written story. I think that readers with a strong fetish for financial domination will absolutely love this. For me, it felt a little too real, and I ended up feeling depressed by how the narrator was being financially exploited by Ron. But that's not a knock on your story--I'm just saying it didn't line up with my erotic tastes.
Ron
2/1/21, 4:27 PM
Great job! I really appreciate when a story is well-written with good structure. I'm an old-school stickler for proper grammar/spelling, etc. It helps me enjoy the story more (and also get off) when I'm not distracted by bad spelling/punctuation.