Recent Comments

hypnosub
2/1/21, 7:54 PM
i'm just catching up on this story and i love it! the slow burn style of it is phenomenal and leaves me wanting more - a great quality in a story! i can't wait to see everyone turn into hot chads lol
Jan 31, 2021
boi98229
2/1/21, 6:46 PM
i have never really imagined myself a top and certainly never an Alpha. Still i really felt that shift in power. That feeling of seduction and submission was incredibly hot. Even when i get really aroused by a story, i still don't get off, just really really horny. Most of the time getting hot and horny is enough, but this story had me powering nonstop through all those "Sir, yes, sir"s and stroking hard just like that pussy Total Top! Thanks so much! Great story!
2/1/21, 6:04 PM
has become a favorite story, hope there is a part 2 in the works.
Jan 3, 2021
Tranceguy
2/1/21, 5:08 PM
Hot story Man! I can fully imagine how Tom stared on the screen and can't look away until he was transformed to gay. Go ahead! :-)
2/1/21, 4:37 PM
I agree with the above comments that this is a well-written story. I think that readers with a strong fetish for financial domination will absolutely love this. For me, it felt a little too real, and I ended up feeling depressed by how the narrator was being financially exploited by Ron. But that's not a knock on your story--I'm just saying it didn't line up with my erotic tastes.
Ron
2/1/21, 4:27 PM
Great job! I really appreciate when a story is well-written with good structure. I'm an old-school stickler for proper grammar/spelling, etc. It helps me enjoy the story more (and also get off) when I'm not distracted by bad spelling/punctuation.
2/1/21, 3:23 PM
A really great conclusion to the King Rex & Cycle One sagas. All tied together wonderfully, and seeing John J as the priest of his church was the perfect touch.
2/1/21, 1:31 PM
I'm expecting Aphrodite to make her champion from one of the guys who got stomped over by the other champions after this chapter, with Kevin on top position.
Jan 31, 2021
Cracker
2/1/21, 1:11 PM
Sorry Tanners that would be a different story.
Robbie
2/1/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great story, always love a "stolen" life and a removal of every bit of body hair, keeping the mind younger than they think hehe