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Jan 3, 2021
Tranceguy
2/1/21, 5:08 PM
Hot story Man! I can fully imagine how Tom stared on the screen and can't look away until he was transformed to gay. Go ahead! :-)
2/1/21, 4:37 PM
I agree with the above comments that this is a well-written story. I think that readers with a strong fetish for financial domination will absolutely love this. For me, it felt a little too real, and I ended up feeling depressed by how the narrator was being financially exploited by Ron. But that's not a knock on your story--I'm just saying it didn't line up with my erotic tastes.
Ron
2/1/21, 4:27 PM
Great job! I really appreciate when a story is well-written with good structure. I'm an old-school stickler for proper grammar/spelling, etc. It helps me enjoy the story more (and also get off) when I'm not distracted by bad spelling/punctuation.
2/1/21, 3:23 PM
A really great conclusion to the King Rex & Cycle One sagas. All tied together wonderfully, and seeing John J as the priest of his church was the perfect touch.
2/1/21, 1:31 PM
I'm expecting Aphrodite to make her champion from one of the guys who got stomped over by the other champions after this chapter, with Kevin on top position.
Jan 31, 2021
Cracker
2/1/21, 1:11 PM
Sorry Tanners that would be a different story.
Robbie
2/1/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great story, always love a "stolen" life and a removal of every bit of body hair, keeping the mind younger than they think hehe
2/1/21, 10:48 AM
scary and hot
2/1/21, 10:45 AM
Oh, goodness. Now we're getting to the "wet" part of the fascist wet dream, huh? ;p And again, the creep factor is becoming more apparent: "undesirables" and people who don't look "right" being exiled out of sight ("Our customers don't want to see that"), Nick's being turned, and ESPECIALLY the drugs that are permissible in this society (cocaine--an upper that gives people energy to work harder--and damn *roofies*...those don't need an explanation). I also want to say that the use of burritos in the first two chapters and Chili's in this one is particularly clever--even as other races vanish, the Chads still want to indulge in their culture, and the fact that you picked Mexican cuisine can't be a coincidence...this society literally consumes other people for its own growth, and the food reflects that. Hypnothrill, you sly symbolist. ;p
Jan 31, 2021
2/1/21, 9:51 AM
Can you continue the story but this time they meet in person?