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Jan 31, 2021
2/1/21, 7:02 AM
Love reading about these loser fake alphas who get broken and turned into cashfags. They make the rest of us alphas look bad.
boi98229
2/1/21, 6:51 AM
Wow! So sizzling hot! i love hypnosis! It is totally relaxing, arousing, and all round incredibly pleasurable. I'm not sure if i can really describe the pleasant physical and mental feelings it engenders, but i completely get this story. It could almost be me, except that while i can be very deeply relaxed, i cannot imagine being so out of it that i would ever pay a findom who i had never met or at all for that matter. i am not really into reading inductions. Audio and video are so much more effective for me. As a result, i did find the induction part a little long, but if i had been in a better mood for it, i would likely have enjoyed that part more as well. It certainly does fit well with the story in any case. Your story and the induction language seemed very real, as though much of it you actually have experienced yourself. In summary i love your story, and hope you post more erotic hypno stories. Thanks so very much for sharing your skill and imagination! Looking forward to more from you (either this story or others). ~david
Troy
2/1/21, 6:43 AM
I really want Rocco to make Ronnie the king at last and rule alongside him....
2/1/21, 6:21 AM
Amazing! Please more!
2/1/21, 5:22 AM
I don't know who is worse; Mathew for castrating his boyfriend or the uncle for doing the same to him. I liked the original series but this paints it with a much darker brush.
Daniel
2/1/21, 3:05 AM
not my favorite dude, but you know you are ! I.J.S.
Daniel
2/1/21, 2:54 AM
let's see where it goes dude I.J.S.
2/1/21, 1:32 AM
looking forward to the next chapter!
Art
1/31/21, 11:50 PM
Great story! I'd love to see even more buildup, some more time with the descent into hypno slave, in the next one. But otherwise really nicely done!
1/31/21, 11:34 PM
Classic Cockatrice. You're a natural with inanimate-TF concepts Good character interaction, and Jeremry's unfurling during the 'dates' was good stuff and fun reading. I felt the lore schpeel at the beginning was unnecessarily long and deep (that's what she said). Once you've established the lore to your own satisfaction, a synopsis of it in-story, for the reader, will usually suffice I find. It's not a fatal error; I just had to think of a criticism to balance out the ass kissing.