Recent Comments

Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
1/30/21, 12:15 AM
I would pay to be transformed like that
Highwayman
1/30/21, 12:11 AM
I agree with Nocturne13 that the story is very promising, and perhaps some back story would help clarify and make the action more fulfilling. Whilst there are typos I do not think there are any 4th wall errors for me, although I would recommend either Grammarly or ProWritingAid. Altogether a fascinating story and I look forward to seeing where it leads.
Daniel
1/29/21, 11:42 PM
extremely well written, don't know if I'm correct or not, but the subtlety and layered intelligence are 'stoking my kink fire' a bit I.J.S.
1/29/21, 11:14 PM
Dropping by later to catch a buzz.
1/29/21, 10:38 PM
Glad you enjoyed it!
Daniel
1/29/21, 10:17 PM
very hot hypno erotica, really solid narrative-a refreshing sense of maturity in the storytelling , detail and pacing I.J.S.
1/29/21, 9:44 PM
Well let me know how it flows as a series. I hate plot holes when rewatching a tv series, so I would be glad to fix any in my own writings 😆
1/29/21, 9:43 PM
Dear Pup Don, thanks for a brilliant story. i love how you wove self acceptance, freedom and a whole range of kink together.
1/29/21, 9:27 PM
This was great. Loved the moment where Connor is watching the two guys and is just pleased with himself.
Daniel
1/29/21, 9:07 PM
my first 'experience' with you dude- hot hypno action . The hickey really worked for me, I love corruption/ resistance / acceptancs I.J.S.