Recent Comments

DiaperthisDaddy
1/30/21, 12:46 AM
very hot! I was hard the entire time.
arigabot
1/30/21, 12:37 AM
i love the lore, makes things much more interesting
1/30/21, 12:20 AM
Well I am getting fairly close to finishing the third chapter, and there will be more, as I plan to give stories to each of the three guards and the medic.
1/30/21, 12:17 AM
I haven't seen any plot hole, and the new additions helped with the flow
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
1/30/21, 12:15 AM
I would pay to be transformed like that
Highwayman
1/30/21, 12:11 AM
I agree with Nocturne13 that the story is very promising, and perhaps some back story would help clarify and make the action more fulfilling. Whilst there are typos I do not think there are any 4th wall errors for me, although I would recommend either Grammarly or ProWritingAid. Altogether a fascinating story and I look forward to seeing where it leads.
Daniel
1/29/21, 11:42 PM
extremely well written, don't know if I'm correct or not, but the subtlety and layered intelligence are 'stoking my kink fire' a bit I.J.S.
1/29/21, 11:14 PM
Dropping by later to catch a buzz.
1/29/21, 10:38 PM
Glad you enjoyed it!
Daniel
1/29/21, 10:17 PM
very hot hypno erotica, really solid narrative-a refreshing sense of maturity in the storytelling , detail and pacing I.J.S.