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1/29/21, 9:44 PM
Well let me know how it flows as a series. I hate plot holes when rewatching a tv series, so I would be glad to fix any in my own writings 😆
1/29/21, 9:43 PM
Dear Pup Don, thanks for a brilliant story. i love how you wove self acceptance, freedom and a whole range of kink together.
1/29/21, 9:27 PM
This was great. Loved the moment where Connor is watching the two guys and is just pleased with himself.
Daniel
1/29/21, 9:07 PM
my first 'experience' with you dude- hot hypno action . The hickey really worked for me, I love corruption/ resistance / acceptancs I.J.S.
Daniel
1/29/21, 8:39 PM
hot but brief, more corruption / resistance / acceptance dude I.J.S.
1/29/21, 8:06 PM
I am republishing with a different series title and idk why but it took the first one out of the "clients of the Witchdoctor" series but left this one in for some reason.
CigarMuscle
1/29/21, 7:19 PM
Oh hell yea! Great work man!
1/29/21, 6:57 PM
the first part of the is missing, were the changes there?
1/29/21, 6:17 PM
It's a really sexy story and it's a fun premise. I think the story would be a little stronger if you made it clear that the victim is normally a bully, because he seems like a helpless victim the entire time. Then again maybe he's not a bully, and maybe his husband is just awful and thinks that anytime he's been disagreed with it's him being bullied. The story doesn't just have typos, there are several places where words seem to be missing or the sentence is just choppy perhaps from hasty editing. It makes the action unclear in places, so it's something you really need to correct.