Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/28/21, 10:50 PM
Love what you’re trying to do, but all the typos hurt how easy the story is to read. Getting someone to help proofread and tidy up that side of things would really help do justice to the ideas :)
1/28/21, 10:36 PM
I'm writing a second part for this story.
Daniel
1/28/21, 10:24 PM
Hypnothrill you should not have to deal with archaic 1950s prejudicial bullshit...yikes! You're an artist, make art- in other words as a trailer park red neck, I say FUCK YOU SNOWFLAKE I.J.S.
1/28/21, 10:06 PM
Ah, I love this idea but I wish you'd developed it further! What a hot setup, I'd really love to read about him as he came to terms with his new life.
1/28/21, 10:02 PM
take your time about the story, also I also apriciate when the punishment is proportional, also I don't like when the punishment either misfire or have colatetal damage or victims
1/28/21, 9:43 PM
While I am a fan of the punishment factor, it has to fit the crime. Also I did want to give a bit of personality difference to each guy. And with the detective spying on Dr. Belvedere he would have to have known about the sabotage and allowed it to happen.
1/28/21, 9:37 PM
I also really apriciate the fact that the detctive, who is remorseful receved a lighter punishment
Darren
1/28/21, 4:25 PM
Hot 🔥 !
1/28/21, 1:38 PM
This series is so much fun! I feel kind of bad for the bear, but I love a good literal wish -- more, I'm glad he'll be at the National Zoo, so at least I can see him on occasion. The Uniform story broke away from the expected tropes -- I enjoyed the "passing off" from one service to the next. Keep going!
giveintothemusk
1/28/21, 1:05 PM
Just wanna bump this and plead for more! Great series.