Recent Comments

Ken
1/27/21, 6:27 AM
You could always have another superhero or even a cop to check up on him for his "different" behavior. Maybe even pair them up? Let them believe they're lovers or husbands??
Ken
1/27/21, 6:07 AM
Maybe him and his buddy Johnny should do video's together.
Anonymous
1/27/21, 5:36 AM
puzzle pieces. what a treat you are to read bud :)
Daniel
1/27/21, 5:31 AM
sooo inventive and well written dude, more Bobby action please I.J.S.
1/27/21, 4:41 AM
well where the hell did Drew come from ? Out of nowhere ! Strange ending ! I call for a rewrite ! Try Again !!!
Daniel
1/27/21, 4:35 AM
so freakin' imaginative! ok dude, where we going from here ? I.J.S.
Chase
1/27/21, 4:32 AM
Loved it! Would have loved to have seem the cute guy after and how he acted now that he'd been corrupted.
1/27/21, 4:11 AM
To be fair it would have been a lot hotter and better if you had actually converted them to gay at the end. Though it was very well written I however do not think it belongs on this site.
Mar 28, 2020
Daniel
1/27/21, 4:06 AM
very hot stuff- cop corruption and enslavement is hot, slow down the process a bit dude I.J.S.
1/27/21, 3:15 AM
How wickedly clever! I loved the description and stream-of-consciousness style here. I could visualize the whole scene, and it was delicious.