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Anonymous
1/26/21, 2:58 PM
DAMN!! Clever and hot!!!
1/26/21, 2:03 PM
Chapter 2 was a worthy successor to your first pinball story. I love the new bonus, and it leaves Chapter 3 primed for the machine to do some *mental* rewiring of the next visitor to the arcade.
1/26/21, 1:58 PM
Very, Very Hot.
Jan 18, 2021
Cracker
1/26/21, 1:57 PM
While that might be a hot story, it has no relevance to this story. There are stories on that theme here in this site. :)
1/26/21, 1:30 PM
Thanks Man, I Love this!
1/26/21, 1:30 PM
cannt wait to read more
boi98229
1/26/21, 12:02 PM
Maybe i just feel the pleasure of a submissive addicted to hypnosis, but i didn't find the control of the twins creepy nor did i feel any of the characters betrayed anyone else. It seemed to be that there was good communication, well-intentioned friendship, and informed consent at every step. As much as i enjoy being hypnotized, i don't believe that hypnotic control is consistently so strong that a subject would not be able to make a conscious decision to leave such a group. In any case, i don't have the impression that the twins had a desire to control their friends to that extent. Actually it would not have occurred to me to even express this perspective if i hadn't already read the comments above and felt the need to express a different reaction to the story. While i don't think betrayal was part of this story or intended to be, like EntrancedGay92, i do find hypnosis and betrayal are hot themes in stories intended as erotic fantasy. i thought every aspect of the story hot as hell! i enjoyed the characters and the way the plot brought them all together. i thought the pace of development and length of the story was fine, though personally when i like a story this much i would be even happier if it were a full novel! Personally i would love to meet all these guys, and live in that kind of all male hierarchical household. Thanks for sharing!
1/26/21, 11:56 AM
Our Army will surely return. You will see.
1/26/21, 10:21 AM
interesting concept
Jan 24, 2021
1/26/21, 7:35 AM
Ahhh I figured this was a book adaption, nice work! One of my favourite books I had to read was “In Lucia’s eyes” about Casanova. But it might not be as refreshing haha