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1/26/21, 6:37 AM
Great start. got to admit I hoped it had been longer when I reached the end but always leave them wanting more, right? Liked when Ben was wondering about gays liking straights. Thought it was a good juxtaposition between the horndog straight guys always chasing girls and the horndog gay guys always chasing guys and the unspoken awareness that the straight guys, consciously or unconsciously, have that we're all more alike, gay or straight, then they want to admit when it comes to sex. About to read chapter 2.
Daniel
1/26/21, 5:10 AM
ok let's see...I.J.S.
Daniel
1/26/21, 5:04 AM
please be more specific in the corruption sequences I.J.S.
Daniel
1/26/21, 4:57 AM
yeppers dude, you fast tracked over what I'm sure would have been the best part of this chapter I.J.S.
Daniel
1/26/21, 1:42 AM
well written narrative, hooooot sex, should write one about police or army corruption, good work dude I.J.S.
Jan 24, 2021
1/26/21, 12:55 AM
This is a hell of a lot more fun and stimulating than Lord of the Flies! I too would love to see you adapt Gulliver's Travels or even ( heh heh) The Swiss Family Robinson.
Rock Creek Werewolf
1/26/21, 12:52 AM
@darkblade2814 Be careful what you wish for...
1/26/21, 12:50 AM
Thanks for the input, Guys.
1/26/21, 12:49 AM
Thanks for the comments on Ch. 1 & Ch. 2, vicbiguy3. I hadn't thought about a 3rd chapter, but your suggestion makes me give it thought.
1/26/21, 12:45 AM
Great stuff! Hope you do a third chapter, tell us what happens to Jack/Tkan. Hope he comes back to the tribe.