Recent Comments

SIR
1/25/21, 11:44 PM
Very sexy! I hope you write another chapter soon! It'd be great if you can have Luke get on some stripper action!
Daniel
1/25/21, 11:31 PM
right with you Larry and Stroppy Author....so hot Sir I.J.S.
1/25/21, 11:14 PM
> A pity that the coaches fell victim to the Supply War. That well and truly saddens me. > Here's my take: Coot is probably dead, anyway. He was in his late 60's when the story took place 20 years ago, making him somewhere in his 80's now. I would think the emotional loss of the drug (and the physical degradation) would be enough to take Coot out of the picture. When the supply was lost, I would think the Head Coach (Coach John, right?) would take his anger and addiction out on Sam Bennett -- the distributor. I imagine Sam's life was initially hell because the athletic departments he had contracts with probably focused their revenge on him. It's reasonable to me to assume Stats would probably become a counselor, along the same path as Father John J. Of all of them, he had the most empathy. I don't know what would've happened to the Big Bear Coach, but we know he's noble and strong -- I'm sure he would've chosen the path of "right" not "might." Twenty years later would find him in his early 60's, probably, Stats in his early 50's, Coach John in his late 60's/ early 70's? Let's pretend Stats and Big Bear Davis are members of Father John J's congregation.
Danieln
1/25/21, 10:55 PM
agree with Stroppy Author, so many squandered ' really hot ' moments with the kidnapped ( ooh ), hypnotized ( double ooh ) 5 brothers. As Columbia said "slow down, slow down- it's too nice a job to rush" ....sir I.J.S.
1/25/21, 10:53 PM
It was fast-paced as those above have stated, but the writing and concept were great! And a very hot plot! My bit of critique is, you gave too many details at the beginning about the end. Sort of like standing in line for a movie and the people coming out of the last showing tell you how it ends. I'm fine with hinting at the ending, at the beginning, but you revealed quite a bit before the story started. Still, I thought this was very hot, got me REAL excited and horny! :-)
1/25/21, 10:36 PM
This is far and away one of my fav recent series! I always get excited when I see a new chapter and this one was amazing! Keep em coming!
Daniel
1/25/21, 10:28 PM
this just keeps getting better- turn me on dude...sir I.J.S.
Jan 25, 2021
UnderAdvisment
1/25/21, 9:38 PM
I love the wonderful classic hypnostis stories like this. Great work
Daniel
1/25/21, 9:35 PM
interesting, imaginative narrative- digging the mega corruption vibe sir I.J.S.
Daniel
1/25/21, 9:25 PM
keep it cummin' luv I.J.S.