Recent Comments

Danieln
1/25/21, 10:55 PM
agree with Stroppy Author, so many squandered ' really hot ' moments with the kidnapped ( ooh ), hypnotized ( double ooh ) 5 brothers. As Columbia said "slow down, slow down- it's too nice a job to rush" ....sir I.J.S.
1/25/21, 10:53 PM
It was fast-paced as those above have stated, but the writing and concept were great! And a very hot plot! My bit of critique is, you gave too many details at the beginning about the end. Sort of like standing in line for a movie and the people coming out of the last showing tell you how it ends. I'm fine with hinting at the ending, at the beginning, but you revealed quite a bit before the story started. Still, I thought this was very hot, got me REAL excited and horny! :-)
1/25/21, 10:36 PM
This is far and away one of my fav recent series! I always get excited when I see a new chapter and this one was amazing! Keep em coming!
Daniel
1/25/21, 10:28 PM
this just keeps getting better- turn me on dude...sir I.J.S.
Jan 25, 2021
UnderAdvisment
1/25/21, 9:38 PM
I love the wonderful classic hypnostis stories like this. Great work
Daniel
1/25/21, 9:35 PM
interesting, imaginative narrative- digging the mega corruption vibe sir I.J.S.
Daniel
1/25/21, 9:25 PM
keep it cummin' luv I.J.S.
Daniel
1/25/21, 9:17 PM
this is starting to rock...sir I.J.S.
1/25/21, 9:11 PM
Sexually romantic. thanks
Daniel
1/25/21, 9:08 PM
ok...I'm ready sir I.J.S.