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1/25/21, 5:16 PM
Yes. At first he was going to be a security guard to the scientist, but I've changed him to a private detective for the SAS church.
1/25/21, 4:42 PM
Please continue if ever, i like it with unaware teacher
1/25/21, 4:37 PM
will we see more of this?
1/25/21, 4:27 PM
is the detective the guard?
1/25/21, 3:52 PM
Wow. Amazing. Glad you stretched out #4 to 10K. Making Johnny J a priest of muscle was great. I kind of expected to see Fat Tony make an appearance but maybe he is still making sure Timmy Thompson doesn't say a word. I did not expect Superion's orgasm to summon Rex and open a portal. Talk about it feeling out of this world. I know Superion was elated to have his husband back but did the thought go through his head that if he had not denied himself for twenty years could he have brought him home sooner? Maybe it took the fight with Glen and bring Glenn off his high. Thanks for bringing it full circle. Happy ending for all.
Daniel
1/25/21, 3:51 PM
seriously wild, corruptive, well written narrative- bringing in the dude at the end was a nice touch I.J.S.
1/25/21, 2:48 PM
needed to add more scenes with marines. let us hear about him & what he was feeling & thinking !
1/25/21, 2:45 PM
I have begun work on the sequel. Before I'm too far in, I thought I'd ask about any race preferences. I was thinking Asian for the scientist and African American for the detective?
1/25/21, 2:44 PM
Love this. Hopefully there will be more.