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Daniel
1/25/21, 3:51 PM
seriously wild, corruptive, well written narrative- bringing in the dude at the end was a nice touch I.J.S.
1/25/21, 2:48 PM
needed to add more scenes with marines. let us hear about him & what he was feeling & thinking !
1/25/21, 2:45 PM
I have begun work on the sequel. Before I'm too far in, I thought I'd ask about any race preferences. I was thinking Asian for the scientist and African American for the detective?
1/25/21, 2:44 PM
Love this. Hopefully there will be more.
Jan 24, 2021
1/25/21, 2:43 PM
I think it would interesting to see how you would adapt Gulliver's Travels by Johnathan
Alex
1/25/21, 2:37 PM
That was fun, I want a Sea Breeze as well.
1/25/21, 2:29 PM
Eliminate Ryan and turn him into a urinal while stopping the others from using any other urinal and therefore having to piss down Ryan's throat.
1/25/21, 1:42 PM
I cant get over how hot and amazing your stories are. You are DEFINITELY a writer.
1/25/21, 12:51 PM
Very nice story. In particular I Iiked how you brought race into it with a black guy dealing with white males. I hope you will consider expanding on this theme in future stories you create.
1/25/21, 10:21 AM
interesting story. that would be a fantasy of mine,too great start. can't wait to read more