Recent Comments

A conflicted reader
1/29/25, 11:54 PM
You were right, it is way darker than your usual stories, still pretty hot, though it was way more focused on the dark elements and the plot which is not a bad thing by any means, I just wish the final part was longer cause that was the hottest one, good story overall!

1/30/25, 8:05 PM
@A conflicted reader it was fun to step outside the box i usually put myself in! definitely had to take breaks in between writing it because it got very dark, but overall i'm very happy with how it turned out :)
1/30/25, 12:44 AM
I really like the concept but there wasn’t enough erotic scenes in my opinion. I wish David used his invention to to play more with his victims

1/30/25, 8:04 PM
@[Rad Pits](/user/show/2239300) i always like to ease into those types of scenes with my stories. part 2 will definitely explore that more!
1/30/25, 1:04 AM
Really nice story and of course love the robotic part element thanks for do this and share i love this kind of stories :D

1/30/25, 8:03 PM
@[Bazir](/user/show/911833) thanks!
1/30/25, 7:46 AM
Loved the concept. I’m a sucker for irredeemable selfish guys who use their powers to collect men, especially if they like actually collect men as statues/dolls as Dave does! I wish there were more erotic scenes, but I’m satisfied with this. Hope you make more stories like this one in the future!

1/30/25, 8:03 PM
@[moonlightswallowtail](/user/show/10000863) definitely wanted to ease into the eroticism as i do plan on adding more chapters to this, let me know if you have any ideas for chapter 2!
Boomer
1/30/25, 10:42 AM
Very cool concept, but definitely left me wanting more, would be excited to see further installments :) The darker the better

1/30/25, 8:03 PM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) thank you! let me know if you have any ideas for a potential part 2 :wink:
mic
1/30/25, 7:25 PM
super hot, more, making him your slave, fuck bull bully , lock him in chasity, let him pay you
mic
1/30/25, 7:13 PM
fucking hot story and idea, the fucking best i ever read, please more, more frat tricking film projects, lock him in chasity cage and lay words i his mouth ,let him beg to sell videos online for money , let him pay z even money and work for him, trick him more, and please more cum in nose
mic
1/30/25, 6:48 PM
fucking hot, more frat video doings and hypnotize and forgetting, make more vids, and please more shooting cum in nose ,want too, so fucking hot, smelling their pheromones all day -every day - hot
Wenceslost
1/30/25, 6:31 PM
Loved that, super hot and wholesome!
mic
1/30/25, 6:27 PM
super cool, more, more bondage and locking in costume and chasity make him jarads fleshlite pet fuck hole