Recent Comments

1/23/21, 9:23 AM
I think he should have be made a total slut for the faculty of the institution, just like he was just thinking about scoring girls ( as a bi men, I find this particularly disgusting)
1/23/21, 8:54 AM
I am always open to suggestions 😄. I definitely love a big guy bottom to slim/twink top. I also am debating on how to "punish" the ex....I was thinking of having him longing for love but that the other four split into their respective relationships and only use the ex as a fuck toy every once in a while.
1/23/21, 8:48 AM
do you accept suggestions? I have one for the security guard and the scientist: make the guard bigger and stronger, a power bottom, and the scientist a submissive twink of a top
1/23/21, 8:21 AM
Yes. I wanted to give each man their own background and story so it would have been a very long story all in one read. Also I want to give each man a unique transformation. The three men left will be the scientist that actually made "the cure", a security guard for the SAS lab, and the Ex who volunteered to be "cured".
1/23/21, 8:14 AM
so, I assume the last three will be on the next chapter(s)
1/23/21, 8:09 AM
I love anything where a person's mind and personality are transformed. Plus, I have a shaving fetish. This was such a hot story that hit all my buttons. Thank you.
Jan 22, 2021
jerry
1/23/21, 3:51 AM
Hey here is Jerry. I am still you crazy fan. This is awesome and hope have more series. Besides hope you can continue joey daddy and cockslut!
1/23/21, 3:30 AM
Fuck, this was insanely hot! I never gave a lot of thought to ass to mouth before, but reading this almost felt like I was being hypnotized into getting a fetish for it lol!
1/23/21, 2:37 AM
The arcade is such a terrific setting, and the pinball machine was a *ahem* stroke of genius. The overall set-up of the story and its rising action worked really well, but I agree with your other fans: describing some subtle mental shifts, which could have warped his mind until he flipped as the game-play escalated, would have had us all shooting better!
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/23/21, 2:33 AM
this story is kind sad and cruel, but also incredibly hot