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Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:57 PM
I really love this story! It was very well developed and you built the world well. I'm more surprised you didn't add the classic Edlam dark twist, like one of the sons (Todd specifically) comes to visit his dad at work and is as twisted as Rob and makes changes to the world to be more gay or perverse; or John deciding to step into the room and make changes without Rob knowing, making him more of a sex plaything for him and his sons, or make gay incest a perfectly normal thing for everyone. I found this a much nicer and sweeter story and I really do love it quite a lot.
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:46 PM
spectacular
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:30 PM
Wow. This is great. Reminds me of a similar straight story on mcstories. Pacing is excellent. The suspense added when John tries to get to the generator was very nice. I could definitely see you getting more mileage out of this. One of the other employees at the lab could use the device while John introduces Rob to his new home.
1/22/21, 3:00 PM
Wonderful story!
1/22/21, 2:53 PM
Amazing story and incredible transformations! I hope there is more!
1/22/21, 2:34 PM
I definitely need to see more of this. hope there are plenty of changes!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:33 PM
I'm fairly new to this forum but having been a fan of your writing over at MC stories for a very long time I was thrilled to see this submission. I absolutely love the story it was great! I only wish it hadn't started out so fast. I would have loved to have seen small changes made and some small perception of the changes. I find it so incredibly exciting when they're aware that something has changed but not quite sure what. loved this!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:09 PM
So Hot Man, Thank You!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 1:09 PM
Your writing is incredibly hot. Loved this story!
Rock Creek Werewolf
1/22/21, 11:42 AM
bravo! you should consider writing more!