Recent Comments

1/22/21, 9:29 AM
Hello and thanks for the support! I do plan on having the next part come out soon. This was rather a pretty spontaneous write I did in about two hours, but I do have a little bit more planned. The pinball machine isn't done just yet...
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 9:29 AM
my god!!!! more!!! this is so fucking hot!
Jan 22, 2021
Kent
1/22/21, 9:05 AM
fuckkk im so happy to see a story by you again
1/22/21, 9:00 AM
this is a unique premise one that I have not seen ever I too would like to see a hookup scene as well as see what the final goals of the pinball machine are both defeating the UFO as well as getting the fifth and final cockpit achieving.
1/22/21, 9:00 AM
This was super hot. I want to see someone win the big prize
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 7:16 AM
Soooo hot, I love the pacing and the changes. Maybe is because I was very hooked to the story, that I feel it ended up a bit abruptly. But maybe that was just me, wanting to read more ha, ha! It's always great to read your stories. I'm still waiting another chapter (and maybe even an ending)of your most popular story. After all this years, I still hope one day you surprise us with another chapter and maybe the epic conclusion. Would be great to read more from you!
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 7:00 AM
Edlam! Is it Christmas already again so soon? Always excited to see one of your stories. As expected, this one was great. Please give us another one this year! : )
1/22/21, 6:41 AM
Tempest888. Keep reading. Kyle's "activities" with the boys may not be as clearcut as you think. :)
1/22/21, 6:17 AM
@diaperthisdaddy and @nephilim Oh, don't worry. I TOTALLY intend to post up the enslaving of the asshole. and the mentor. and at least one chapter after that... but if there would be more chapters after that... someone should leave a comment to inspire me to write more... just saying.
Martin
1/22/21, 6:15 AM
Thank you all for your nice comments, as always, you can't know how much I appreciate them. A second chapter is in the works for a long time, I struggle with it (as I usually do with second chapters) but I have many plans with this story, so please bear with me! :) And yes, without spoiling there is something sinister behind it all, but let's not delve into that too early...