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1/22/21, 6:17 AM
@diaperthisdaddy and @nephilim Oh, don't worry. I TOTALLY intend to post up the enslaving of the asshole. and the mentor. and at least one chapter after that... but if there would be more chapters after that... someone should leave a comment to inspire me to write more... just saying.
Martin
1/22/21, 6:15 AM
Thank you all for your nice comments, as always, you can't know how much I appreciate them. A second chapter is in the works for a long time, I struggle with it (as I usually do with second chapters) but I have many plans with this story, so please bear with me! :) And yes, without spoiling there is something sinister behind it all, but let's not delve into that too early...
1/22/21, 5:55 AM
@RedShifter, I see the demand for more "happy endings" thrown around in the comments section a lot these days, but what does that even mean? Doesn't Liam seem much happier at the end of the story? He's no longer alienated from his family, he no longer has to worry about the economic challenges and class prejudice he faced as a small-town boy in the big city, and it looks like his boyfriend will even join him in the village. I have no interest in writing the "Liam saves the day" ending that you're looking for, and I honestly wouldn't even be interested in reading that story. But hey, I've written plenty of stories that were inspired by me reading a story, liking the premise, but wanting to take the narrative in a different direction. I encourage you and all the other readers looking for a certain kind of "happy ending" to do the same and express your own fantasies in writing.
Evan
1/22/21, 5:00 AM
LOVED this. Really enjoyed this series and our protagonist's gradual acceptance of his body and mind in the new world. Love the musk fogging his mind and pheromones sparking his body's desire and helping him along. It's both a sweet and hot story! Great job!
1/22/21, 4:33 AM
Well, currently I am working on a three part story (1st part The Bachelor Party is already posted). i should have the second part up by some time next week. After I'm done with the 3 parter, i am thinking about starting up a Patreon account. In which case, I will only be posting one story (one chapter) on here a month. Just need some extra cash and i hope you guys understand :) Also please know that i have not made up my mind about Patreon yet.
1/22/21, 4:32 AM
I've been reading this story, and I was hoping this would have a nice ending where the two get out of these dares and actually make a mends, but the moment Kyle shows up I had lost hope. However, he does seem like a nice guy and clearly didn't want to abuse the two boys with his internal dialogue, but the moment they woke up and started refering to him as "master" I pretty much gave up. I'm all for writing how you wish, but I'm just disappointed because out of all the stories on here I've only ever read 5 with happy endings. I'm getting real tired of all the sadistic stuff. I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound harsh, I'm just trying to voice a clearly unpopular opinion.
Anonymous
1/22/21, 4:16 AM
Guys -- fantasy -- don't get so wrapped up. I actually liked the story and the ending. Why should the good guys always win? Bad guys need some lovin'.
Ken
1/22/21, 3:58 AM
GREAT story. LOVED it. Feel free to keep writing in this type of arc You could use superheros, police, firemen, UPS guys, military, or like darkblade2814 said. Back at the bar.
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:37 AM
great story would love to see a chapter about anal play or stretching like fisting, or something like watersports. also my vote would be for victor or ryan to leave
1/22/21, 2:45 AM
This was great, Martin! I finally got around to reading it. xD. I do adore the way that he eventually comes around to enjoying and accepting what he did. I also sort of like the open-endedness of it. Makes you wonder if this acceptance was also part of the control and displays a more insidious side to the organization. :3