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1/21/21, 10:12 PM
Loved the physical TF! Made me want to read that hookup scene in the sauna, too...
1/21/21, 10:00 PM
Um ... Hate to be a Debbie Downer here, but there's a bit of a plothole here. In Chapter One Brad built this machine to try to cure his Parkinson’s Disease. If it didn't work as intended, it's going to be a real bummer when Brad starts developing serious tremors - not fun sexy-time with your twink slave at all. Guess Key could just kick him out on the street to suffer and decline then; Key doesn't strike me as someone who cares about anyone but himself. Oh well. ETA: All it would take to 'fix' it would be a sentence or two (maybe in Chapter Two) where Brad realizes after the treatment that he no longer feels the trembles anymore - "It had worked!" - and then continue with the mind control shennanigins as already written.
1/21/21, 9:07 PM
I love these stories! keep going!!
Anon
1/21/21, 9:01 PM
I hope you go all the way and fuck him while he is pregnant. Embrace degeneracy
Anonymous
1/21/21, 8:35 PM
If you feel like continuing this, it would be great. Really good. The male pregnancy twist is very hot.
giveintothemusk
1/21/21, 6:39 PM
Excellent!
giveintothemusk
1/21/21, 6:21 PM
What an incredible series so far. You're a talented writer! Loooove pheromones and musk, so the parts about his balls and pits had me swooning. What I wouldn't give. . . 🤤🤤🤤
1/21/21, 5:14 PM
You right sex so well! But I'm confused at the scant comeuppance who was the woman he saw in the first part? Was she punishing him for being such a douche? Because he really seems to be enjoying his punishment. The mpreg plot is interesting not much of that on here
Anonymous
1/21/21, 4:32 PM
I dare you to not see or hear the words "I dare you" any more! :)
1/21/21, 3:59 PM
> given your Author name, I imagined the whole thing taking place at JR’s on 17th Street NW. Goodness knows I’ve been sloppy there at Showtunes after a bad date. > Sigh... haven't we all? The fun of this "jumping off" place is that the mechanism for transformation is introduced in a fun narrative. This kind of exposition can be exhausting in a story and here, @rockcreekwerewolf gives us humor and ease. In the end, the warlocks don't matter other than they created the magic elixir that the Barkeep is doling out quick! Can't wait to read the stories of the people who get the drinks. Good job, my friend!