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1/21/21, 1:57 PM
It's a great ending, but honestly, that Key end up on top was the predictable end. Given my experience on this site, it would have been more surprising that Eddy or especially Brad end as masters. Would have blow my mind away.
1/21/21, 1:27 PM
Thanks, Hypnothrill, for the observations. I can see where you're coming from. I decided not to go that way, feeling I'd get too involved in the weeds, as it were, at the expense of the story.
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Horn Thank you so much! I really appreciate this comment :D
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I will have to keep that in mind. We'll see.
1/21/21, 12:35 PM
This is a nice start! Albeit, you might want someone to proof-read.
1/21/21, 12:04 PM
Wow. So hot! Loving this story so much...
Joe
1/21/21, 11:55 AM
great story! love all the inductions and enslavements. thank you for writing and sharing
1/21/21, 11:17 AM
Loved the unique premise and the descriptions of the pinball machine itself! Just wish that we could have seen Porter and Tyler's hookup in greater detail and gotten a clearer sense of Porter's mental transformation into a mega-hung himbo.
1/21/21, 11:06 AM
Great premise! I'm quite excited to see what you have in mind! .... and given your Author name, I imagined the whole thing taking place at JR's on 17th Street NW. Goodness knows I've been sloppy there at Showtunes after a bad date.
1/21/21, 11:01 AM
really good zombie horror. 10/10