Recent Comments

1/22/21, 4:32 AM
I've been reading this story, and I was hoping this would have a nice ending where the two get out of these dares and actually make a mends, but the moment Kyle shows up I had lost hope. However, he does seem like a nice guy and clearly didn't want to abuse the two boys with his internal dialogue, but the moment they woke up and started refering to him as "master" I pretty much gave up. I'm all for writing how you wish, but I'm just disappointed because out of all the stories on here I've only ever read 5 with happy endings. I'm getting real tired of all the sadistic stuff. I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound harsh, I'm just trying to voice a clearly unpopular opinion.
Anonymous
1/22/21, 4:16 AM
Guys -- fantasy -- don't get so wrapped up. I actually liked the story and the ending. Why should the good guys always win? Bad guys need some lovin'.
Ken
1/22/21, 3:58 AM
GREAT story. LOVED it. Feel free to keep writing in this type of arc You could use superheros, police, firemen, UPS guys, military, or like darkblade2814 said. Back at the bar.
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:37 AM
great story would love to see a chapter about anal play or stretching like fisting, or something like watersports. also my vote would be for victor or ryan to leave
1/22/21, 2:45 AM
This was great, Martin! I finally got around to reading it. xD. I do adore the way that he eventually comes around to enjoying and accepting what he did. I also sort of like the open-endedness of it. Makes you wonder if this acceptance was also part of the control and displays a more insidious side to the organization. :3
1/22/21, 2:06 AM
MUCH better! Looking forward to the confrontation!
Anonymous
1/22/21, 12:48 AM
Hot!! Can't wait for the next one!
1/22/21, 12:13 AM
Fun story..."I felt like Neopolitan ice cream sometimes"...LOL. Well written. I'm not a fan of drag queens and that one annoyed me as much as the ones in real life. Nice portrayal.
1/22/21, 12:09 AM
I know I'm the outlier here but it would he cool to see a 'happy ending' for once where the protagonist does escape and successfully dismantles the operation and saves everyone.. maybe because seeing the love of his life turned snaps him out of it because it's so viscerally jarring, or something like that.
Ravenclaw
1/21/21, 11:39 PM
Awesome story. my favourite weed story. can't wait to read more from you.