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1/22/21, 12:09 AM
I know I'm the outlier here but it would he cool to see a 'happy ending' for once where the protagonist does escape and successfully dismantles the operation and saves everyone.. maybe because seeing the love of his life turned snaps him out of it because it's so viscerally jarring, or something like that.
Ravenclaw
1/21/21, 11:39 PM
Awesome story. my favourite weed story. can't wait to read more from you.
1/21/21, 10:58 PM
This is a well-written story. However, I was hoping for some mind control elements. Perhaps it'll be in the next chapter? Thank you.
1/21/21, 10:26 PM
that was a fun ride, I have an idea, what about we get an interlude showing us the town where the bar is now that everyone in it is gay/lesbian, so we can have a taste of it and maybe the bartender and Gunni doing some renovations at the bar, a little bit of slice of life would be nice
1/21/21, 10:13 PM
Great way to end this arc. I hope you keep writing more stories in this series.
1/21/21, 10:12 PM
Loved the physical TF! Made me want to read that hookup scene in the sauna, too...
1/21/21, 10:00 PM
Um ... Hate to be a Debbie Downer here, but there's a bit of a plothole here. In Chapter One Brad built this machine to try to cure his Parkinson’s Disease. If it didn't work as intended, it's going to be a real bummer when Brad starts developing serious tremors - not fun sexy-time with your twink slave at all. Guess Key could just kick him out on the street to suffer and decline then; Key doesn't strike me as someone who cares about anyone but himself. Oh well. ETA: All it would take to 'fix' it would be a sentence or two (maybe in Chapter Two) where Brad realizes after the treatment that he no longer feels the trembles anymore - "It had worked!" - and then continue with the mind control shennanigins as already written.
1/21/21, 9:07 PM
I love these stories! keep going!!
Anon
1/21/21, 9:01 PM
I hope you go all the way and fuck him while he is pregnant. Embrace degeneracy
Anonymous
1/21/21, 8:35 PM
If you feel like continuing this, it would be great. Really good. The male pregnancy twist is very hot.