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Anonymous
1/21/21, 4:32 PM
I dare you to not see or hear the words "I dare you" any more! :)
1/21/21, 3:59 PM
> given your Author name, I imagined the whole thing taking place at JR’s on 17th Street NW. Goodness knows I’ve been sloppy there at Showtunes after a bad date. > Sigh... haven't we all? The fun of this "jumping off" place is that the mechanism for transformation is introduced in a fun narrative. This kind of exposition can be exhausting in a story and here, @rockcreekwerewolf gives us humor and ease. In the end, the warlocks don't matter other than they created the magic elixir that the Barkeep is doling out quick! Can't wait to read the stories of the people who get the drinks. Good job, my friend!
Anonymous
1/21/21, 3:40 PM
excellent
1/21/21, 3:15 PM
Damn, I'm loving this!
1/21/21, 3:04 PM
Oh Hell Yeah! Well DOne!
Anonymous
1/21/21, 1:59 PM
Slime, eh? Can't wait to see where this goes!
1/21/21, 1:57 PM
It's a great ending, but honestly, that Key end up on top was the predictable end. Given my experience on this site, it would have been more surprising that Eddy or especially Brad end as masters. Would have blow my mind away.
1/21/21, 1:27 PM
Thanks, Hypnothrill, for the observations. I can see where you're coming from. I decided not to go that way, feeling I'd get too involved in the weeds, as it were, at the expense of the story.
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Horn Thank you so much! I really appreciate this comment :D
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I will have to keep that in mind. We'll see.