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1/21/21, 10:58 PM
This is a well-written story. However, I was hoping for some mind control elements. Perhaps it'll be in the next chapter? Thank you.
1/21/21, 10:26 PM
that was a fun ride, I have an idea, what about we get an interlude showing us the town where the bar is now that everyone in it is gay/lesbian, so we can have a taste of it and maybe the bartender and Gunni doing some renovations at the bar, a little bit of slice of life would be nice
1/21/21, 10:13 PM
Great way to end this arc. I hope you keep writing more stories in this series.
1/21/21, 10:12 PM
Loved the physical TF! Made me want to read that hookup scene in the sauna, too...
1/21/21, 10:00 PM
Um ... Hate to be a Debbie Downer here, but there's a bit of a plothole here. In Chapter One Brad built this machine to try to cure his Parkinson’s Disease. If it didn't work as intended, it's going to be a real bummer when Brad starts developing serious tremors - not fun sexy-time with your twink slave at all. Guess Key could just kick him out on the street to suffer and decline then; Key doesn't strike me as someone who cares about anyone but himself. Oh well. ETA: All it would take to 'fix' it would be a sentence or two (maybe in Chapter Two) where Brad realizes after the treatment that he no longer feels the trembles anymore - "It had worked!" - and then continue with the mind control shennanigins as already written.
1/21/21, 9:07 PM
I love these stories! keep going!!
Anon
1/21/21, 9:01 PM
I hope you go all the way and fuck him while he is pregnant. Embrace degeneracy
Anonymous
1/21/21, 8:35 PM
If you feel like continuing this, it would be great. Really good. The male pregnancy twist is very hot.
giveintothemusk
1/21/21, 6:39 PM
Excellent!
giveintothemusk
1/21/21, 6:21 PM
What an incredible series so far. You're a talented writer! Loooove pheromones and musk, so the parts about his balls and pits had me swooning. What I wouldn't give. . . 🤤🤤🤤