Recent Comments

1/22/21, 4:49 PM
blankbot, I can totally see mind control in the way "Papa" chants over his head at night, and the speed in which he lost English! I imagine more stuff to your liking, to occur in the next chapter?
1/22/21, 4:30 PM
Love this! A new favorite!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 4:11 PM
Amazing story! I'd love to get a sequel where the man comes back to Greg and Paul's house.
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 4:08 PM
Hot. More like this please.
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:57 PM
I really love this story! It was very well developed and you built the world well. I'm more surprised you didn't add the classic Edlam dark twist, like one of the sons (Todd specifically) comes to visit his dad at work and is as twisted as Rob and makes changes to the world to be more gay or perverse; or John deciding to step into the room and make changes without Rob knowing, making him more of a sex plaything for him and his sons, or make gay incest a perfectly normal thing for everyone. I found this a much nicer and sweeter story and I really do love it quite a lot.
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:46 PM
spectacular
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:30 PM
Wow. This is great. Reminds me of a similar straight story on mcstories. Pacing is excellent. The suspense added when John tries to get to the generator was very nice. I could definitely see you getting more mileage out of this. One of the other employees at the lab could use the device while John introduces Rob to his new home.
1/22/21, 3:00 PM
Wonderful story!
1/22/21, 2:53 PM
Amazing story and incredible transformations! I hope there is more!
1/22/21, 2:34 PM
I definitely need to see more of this. hope there are plenty of changes!