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1/20/21, 3:16 PM
Great series but slow it down. It's almost like you're in a hurry to tell the story. There's so much more to be told of the internal struggle and release. Each could easily be another 500-1000 words. Fun fetish series! I'd love to hear more about their fetishes too.
1/20/21, 2:59 PM
I love this story too. Very good potential. Please go on.
1/20/21, 12:58 PM
Thanks, everyone. <3. I'm glad you all liked the story.
1/20/21, 12:52 PM
Good to see some more well-written mpreg stories here.
BPtime
1/20/21, 12:25 PM
Sizzling hot, compelling brainwash and a hint of humor. What more can you want? Apart from, judging by the pictures, spending some time with Giorgi and Liam. Any chance getting the coordinates of the village?
1/20/21, 11:20 AM
@Nocturne13, if you were expecting a story full of alien mind control and male pregnancy, I'm going to guess you didn't look too carefully at the story tags on this one! Actually, this was sort of my unofficial sequel to "[New in Town](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/70277)": totally different setting and characters, but a lot of the same tropes. I often get "please continue this story" comments, but in many cases, writing a direct sequel would just mean doing a boring rehash of what happened in the first story ("...And the Same Thing Happened to Rufus"). So instead, I'm more drawn to offering variations on the same few motifs.
Anonymous
1/20/21, 10:44 AM
Hope you keep going with this story.
1/20/21, 9:15 AM
Given that I'm bi, the fact that Drax is a woman doesn't bother me in the slightest, lol-- I really loved this and I also thought the idea of the questions was really good--but could definitely be developed more!
1/20/21, 7:11 AM
This is just a matter of personal preference, but to me this already-hot story would be absolutely scorching if we just stuck with Trevor's perspective a little longer, through his mental transformation into the porn star Dick. The first part of the story has this great set-up where we get to know Trevor and see his skepticism. But once the actual transformation starts happening, it's told almost entirely in dialogue and stage directions, with no "he thought" or "he felt" statements to give Trevor any interiority.