Recent Comments

1/21/21, 5:53 AM
I probably won't do physical changes in this story. It kinda breaks the rules that Naked Ginger set up when he started this. You can't dare someone to do something flat out impossible. If I go back and rewrite Grand Theft Penis (as I plan, at some point), I may touch on that. I hope you continue to enjoy though
1/21/21, 5:28 AM
hi everyone. I'm glad most of you seem to enjoy the story. I just wanted to be clear that this is a quick standalone story but I might make more stories in the future.
1/21/21, 5:05 AM
Physical changes would be a great addition. I hope they can be a happy couple after their bodies touch.
1/21/21, 3:59 AM
Per usual, very well done. I'm excited to see how the strip show goes.
jamiemboy
1/21/21, 2:05 AM
Love the marine transformation :)
DM
1/21/21, 1:54 AM
great story! keep it up! i love this new element...looking forward to seeing what he is going to do to them
Jockmorphr
1/21/21, 1:03 AM
I am really enjoying this series! Please continue! It would be interesting to see Brandon, Dylan, or Kyle find a way to use the dares to cause physical changes to the two straight studs.
Oddballs
1/20/21, 11:59 PM
I liked it. The writing style is a bit simplistic for my taste, but this was short and sweet, and it got me hard. Stories like this are ALWAYS breath of fresh air for erotic literature, at least the sort that I look for. And I love how it's based off of the photograph in it. Besides that, small penis appreciation are painfully underrated. Thank you for this piece, sir.
1/20/21, 11:59 PM
Nice work. I love the classic hypnotist So looking forward to more parts. Reminded Me of a show I saw. The hypnosis, did some fun things. Some exotic. R rated. Love it, i was Thinking i end up on stage and some thing will be up. Thank you, I be looking for next part.
BarashBenski
1/20/21, 11:30 PM
VERY Good on expanding on the dialogue from the initial comic! There are a few typos here and there, but it didn't take away from the overall story! Highly Approve, and can't wait to see what you expand upon in part two!