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Nov 30, 2019
2/18/21, 6:28 AM
Not one of your better ones I'm afraid. But then they cant all be home runs and most of your work is spectacular. So just a minor disappointment.
2/18/21, 5:42 AM
Hope to read about the Uncle's adventures, as if this is not the last time he uses his powers. Does Conrad have brothers?
2/18/21, 5:29 AM
I normally wouldn't like a story that's this heavy on expository dialogue ("Let's sit down at this table, and I'll explain exactly what's been happening to you over the last six months"). But in this case, I think it actually works because of all the chilling dialogue where Matt calmly explains how good it is to be a slave to their Master.
2/18/21, 3:14 AM
Making Gerbert a foot slut seems nice :3
2/18/21, 2:52 AM
Will we be treated to the full story about how the other three fell?
2/18/21, 2:06 AM
Somehow I missed this chapter, I like it :3
Anonymous
2/18/21, 1:17 AM
I wasn't expecting this plot twist but I'm all for it You are so cruel leaving us hanging high and dry (or hard and wet in my case). Post the next chapter soon!
2/18/21, 12:14 AM
Finally! Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
2/18/21, 12:00 AM
please write more like this!
KJP
2/17/21, 11:52 PM
This was my favorite one so far! Excellent!!