Recent Comments

1/19/21, 10:07 PM
I love each chapter of this story !
1/19/21, 9:32 PM
love it!
1/19/21, 9:12 PM
@Lexorius: Thank you for the comment; the control will expand. But as for spreading the sway out to the world, I don't really have plans to go that far. I'm still working within the bounds of the original story and it never made it out that far. There's something interesting coming up once I can get back to writing. But thanks for reading and commenting on it. (Hopefully I'll get my take on "All Hail the Emperor" up too.)
1/19/21, 8:24 PM
I loved it, you really surprised me
Jan 18, 2021
Sub4Taylor (Mikki)
1/19/21, 8:01 PM
Great story. Love to see an alpha turned into a simpering beta boi. Beyond financial domination, love to see sexual domination where the straight-ish discovers he enjoys servicing other and taking a dick as well. The author knows these fake alphas well. Bravo to him.
1/19/21, 7:39 PM
It reminded me at first of the Midwich Cukoos a.k.a. Village of the Damned. That it was a local guy with the hypnosis loop on speakers and radio was surprisingly mundane! I was expecting alien mind control and male pregnancy ha ha ha ha ha.
DiaperthisDaddy
1/19/21, 7:18 PM
Please continue with more diapers.
1/19/21, 7:09 PM
Me encanto la historia ¿vas a sacar mas capitulos en el futuro?
1/19/21, 4:54 PM
Congratulations on a fine beginning for your new enterprise! I would second many of the comments already entered. Please. keep writing, and consider expanding your descriptive details. This story was excellent, but would have been even better still had you fleshed it out a bit more.
1/19/21, 4:49 PM
Say, this was great! Real sci-fi horror stuff. :) The ending, where the sky begins to rain black, was particularly effective. Nice job! :)