Recent Comments

DiaperthisDaddy
1/19/21, 7:18 PM
Please continue with more diapers.
1/19/21, 7:09 PM
Me encanto la historia ¿vas a sacar mas capitulos en el futuro?
1/19/21, 4:54 PM
Congratulations on a fine beginning for your new enterprise! I would second many of the comments already entered. Please. keep writing, and consider expanding your descriptive details. This story was excellent, but would have been even better still had you fleshed it out a bit more.
1/19/21, 4:49 PM
Say, this was great! Real sci-fi horror stuff. :) The ending, where the sky begins to rain black, was particularly effective. Nice job! :)
BPtime
1/19/21, 4:22 PM
Masterly written, absorbing sexual tension.
Jan 18, 2021
1/19/21, 2:52 PM
Love this story, would love to see more findom elements on here
Syr
1/19/21, 2:35 PM
Te idea is great, but the destiny of pat's girl-now-boyfriend and roommate, the actual fate of everyone in town, among other things are left hanging. This gives you the opportunity for a sequel, and with the way you conveyed the story, you should totally take it
1/19/21, 2:08 PM
Absolutely fantastic! You've got me so hard. This was a great way to start my day! If I had a wish, I'd wish for this game to appear on my doorstep. If I had a second wish, it would be for many more stories about this game from you and maybe others, too!
1/19/21, 1:18 PM
The hottest chapter so far.
Anonymous
1/19/21, 12:31 PM
Loved that you put filipino references to this like maria makiling and putting your clothes backwards when your lost. Also weirdly wholesome ending, i loved it.