Recent Comments

Jan 18, 2021
Sub4Taylor (Mikki)
1/19/21, 8:01 PM
Great story. Love to see an alpha turned into a simpering beta boi. Beyond financial domination, love to see sexual domination where the straight-ish discovers he enjoys servicing other and taking a dick as well. The author knows these fake alphas well. Bravo to him.
1/19/21, 7:39 PM
It reminded me at first of the Midwich Cukoos a.k.a. Village of the Damned. That it was a local guy with the hypnosis loop on speakers and radio was surprisingly mundane! I was expecting alien mind control and male pregnancy ha ha ha ha ha.
DiaperthisDaddy
1/19/21, 7:18 PM
Please continue with more diapers.
1/19/21, 7:09 PM
Me encanto la historia ¿vas a sacar mas capitulos en el futuro?
1/19/21, 4:54 PM
Congratulations on a fine beginning for your new enterprise! I would second many of the comments already entered. Please. keep writing, and consider expanding your descriptive details. This story was excellent, but would have been even better still had you fleshed it out a bit more.
1/19/21, 4:49 PM
Say, this was great! Real sci-fi horror stuff. :) The ending, where the sky begins to rain black, was particularly effective. Nice job! :)
BPtime
1/19/21, 4:22 PM
Masterly written, absorbing sexual tension.
Jan 18, 2021
1/19/21, 2:52 PM
Love this story, would love to see more findom elements on here
Syr
1/19/21, 2:35 PM
Te idea is great, but the destiny of pat's girl-now-boyfriend and roommate, the actual fate of everyone in town, among other things are left hanging. This gives you the opportunity for a sequel, and with the way you conveyed the story, you should totally take it
1/19/21, 2:08 PM
Absolutely fantastic! You've got me so hard. This was a great way to start my day! If I had a wish, I'd wish for this game to appear on my doorstep. If I had a second wish, it would be for many more stories about this game from you and maybe others, too!