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1/18/21, 10:48 PM
keep the story coming
1/18/21, 10:40 PM
Love it!
My fantasy
1/18/21, 10:40 PM
by the gods and Praise lord Hephaestus. make me into your reptilian rubber faggot slave!!
1/18/21, 10:40 PM
Love how the story is not only hot but also sweet.
1/18/21, 9:32 PM
One of the hottest stories of transformation during a game that I've read in quite a while.
1/18/21, 9:06 PM
Honestly, if I had noticed the tag 'straight' I probably wouldn't have bothered reading this one, but the mind control and the erotic focus on male desires/ controlling their orgasms was enough that I don't regret having read it. I appreciate the long set-up with the basketball game - it was very well-written and established their very male competitive baseline clearly; plus it was fairly realistic & low-key, unlike a lot of the OTT jock caricatures often used. I do have to admit that once I twigged to the femdom nature of the story I was disappointed there was no pegging :-). I agree with the above commenter that the questioning had a lot of potential and hopefully will be developed more in other stories by this author or by someone else taking up the concept.
Jan 18, 2021
Cracker
1/18/21, 8:44 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Jade Monkey. I'd love an email :).
1/18/21, 8:33 PM
I love this, but in my own fantasy version Liam joined Jock and Andy. Is there a sequel planned with Rufus? The pictures made this story so much better, especially of Liam.
Jan 18, 2021
1/18/21, 8:23 PM
I always loved the idea of being a finswitch, of findomming others so I can be a cashslave to a real alpha. Well done on this story~
screamingmoist
1/18/21, 7:47 PM
Thanks! I still want to revisit the garden at some point, just haven't had the time.