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1/19/21, 10:30 AM
This is a clever story, loving the build up!
1/19/21, 10:19 AM
Some great ideas here. It could still use a bit more editing, as lines like "a massive duck hanging from his waist" and "the man's duck had fallen out" made me laugh out loud. And I had trouble buying into the premise that everyone in the town except Pat would see black water coming from the faucet and decide to drink it. But the story had some great Lovecraftian horror moments that really worked for me.
1/19/21, 10:04 AM
I had to get used to the English used here, and occasionally I thought that Liam already was dumbed down, which says a lot about me I guess... I loved the bit with Georgi and Pawel! Once I overcame the language thing it made for another Hypnothrill classic! By the way, asking for a friend, who's the guy modeling for Liam?
1/19/21, 9:39 AM
I really enjoyed this. Pushed every single button that I have. Please make more!
1/19/21, 9:18 AM
i would love to see the expansion of control. maybe over military or the rest of the town/country/world ;))
how to read the first story it won't show
1/19/21, 8:03 AM
how to read the first story it won't show
1/19/21, 6:31 AM
Interesting premise! I'd love to see more clone-sex or at least an description of what it feels like to be addicted to whatever that was! Great work!
1/19/21, 3:13 AM
You have my attention . . . and anticipation, Naked Ginger.
Evan
1/19/21, 3:04 AM
I love this style of story with the changing game. And extra wonderful that this wasn't something unwanted done to them but that they enjoyed and wanted to keep. And made the most of. ;) Really enjoyed all of it, including that Brendan could be his real self.
1/19/21, 2:27 AM
I loved this story, I hope there's another chapter.