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1/18/21, 11:43 PM
Thank-you so much for this hot tale! At first I thought it was delightful to see a fathead like Lucas get his comeuppance, but reading further I quickly discovered that the Alpha-Beta world that he stumbles into is the real payoff in this story. I love the fantastical choices you've made with sexual biology and impulses, casting their D/S relationship as part of a natural order, as well as adding justification for some delicious oral play. D/S relationships that are nurturing, where the Beta needs and delights in the guidance that the Alpha provides, are incredibly erotic for me. I love the previous commenter's question about what the police are like in this world. It's also fun to think just generally about how Betas get by day-to-day in a world where Alphas are the sexual aggressors and so much more powerful than they are. Are they expected to defend their virtue and if so how? Are they expected to hold jobs or be homemakers? Do families view their Beta sons as wards who must be married away to strong and respectable Alphas for their own safety? Or is this a world where Alphas and Betas live as equals everywhere but in the bedroom, and everyone has the freedom to be a sexual libertine? If you do write further adventures in this world, I'll be an avid reader for sure!
1/18/21, 10:48 PM
keep the story coming
1/18/21, 10:40 PM
Love it!
My fantasy
1/18/21, 10:40 PM
by the gods and Praise lord Hephaestus. make me into your reptilian rubber faggot slave!!
1/18/21, 10:40 PM
Love how the story is not only hot but also sweet.
1/18/21, 9:32 PM
One of the hottest stories of transformation during a game that I've read in quite a while.
1/18/21, 9:06 PM
Honestly, if I had noticed the tag 'straight' I probably wouldn't have bothered reading this one, but the mind control and the erotic focus on male desires/ controlling their orgasms was enough that I don't regret having read it. I appreciate the long set-up with the basketball game - it was very well-written and established their very male competitive baseline clearly; plus it was fairly realistic & low-key, unlike a lot of the OTT jock caricatures often used. I do have to admit that once I twigged to the femdom nature of the story I was disappointed there was no pegging :-). I agree with the above commenter that the questioning had a lot of potential and hopefully will be developed more in other stories by this author or by someone else taking up the concept.
Jan 18, 2021
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1/18/21, 8:44 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Jade Monkey. I'd love an email :).
1/18/21, 8:33 PM
I love this, but in my own fantasy version Liam joined Jock and Andy. Is there a sequel planned with Rufus? The pictures made this story so much better, especially of Liam.
Jan 18, 2021
1/18/21, 8:23 PM
I always loved the idea of being a finswitch, of findomming others so I can be a cashslave to a real alpha. Well done on this story~