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Anonymous
1/18/21, 12:55 PM
So where's the story? This is either a setup to what the main character will go through, or it's an anchor point for a series of flashbacks so the audience can understand this world better. The audience can then use that information to assume what the character will soon go through as the story ends. Great writing, shame to see it go nowhere.
1/18/21, 12:33 PM
Very hot story, Hypnothrill! Would love to read more if you want to continue it.
Anonymous
1/18/21, 11:37 AM
She promised them 1500$ for doing experiments on them. Did they get the money? If she can't keep her promise then she is just a coward backing out of her words, doesn't deserve the title "mistress".
Anon
1/18/21, 11:34 AM
hot without the pictures even hotter
1/18/21, 11:18 AM
pushed a lot of my buttons! not sure I understand the part where the hypnotist got so blindly angry though. it makes me really pain to see Lukas be hurt that way.
1/18/21, 11:14 AM
I love this series so much, the humiliation and dumbing down are so well done. Every chapter is full of great details and ideas. Is this really the ending? I hope it's not!
1/18/21, 10:01 AM
This was amazing. So good. You should make it a series with different players and fetishes
1/18/21, 8:17 AM
love the way the game change everyone into something different like how Tom became a daddy type.
1/18/21, 7:33 AM
gotacoolname, Thanks, glad you enjoyed. Though this series is mostly random stories that are separate tales, this storyline seems to keep getting comments to continue. Though I'm almost finished with a different story, the Twins will be my project after 😁
1/18/21, 6:07 AM
please please please more!!!!