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1/18/21, 2:09 AM
This isn't my cup of tea since it's straight and all, but something that stuck out to me has having a lot of potential that I wish you'd gone further with is the questions. Specifically question 3 and them being compelled to truthfully answer a question with false information in it, so they on some level have to accept the lie as truth.
1/18/21, 2:01 AM
Short and sweet - perhaps it's a bit trope-y, but honestly a lot of us are here because we like the tropes! I'd agree with some of the other comments; it would be awesome if you could expand on this (at Puppykix suggested, having Oliver start to feel like Cal's dog could be fun). But, overall, for your first erotica work, this is quite good (certainly better than my first attempt!). Nicely done.
Daniel
1/18/21, 1:35 AM
good stuff. love military corruption stories, the scene on the bottom bunk between Dalton and Eric was hot ! I.J.S.
1/18/21, 1:27 AM
just found this story, and REALLY liked it. love Bill Drake's stuff (incl. Cornell, TX), and glad to see it continued here. Did you ever set up the patreon? have future chapters? really hoping, buddy!
1/18/21, 1:13 AM
really enjoyed this one. bravo! it was really cool, and amazingly hot.
1/18/21, 12:30 AM
I really enjoyed it, for obvious reasons. Looking forward to seeing additional chapters of this story. you're a gifted writer.
Daniel
1/18/21, 12:25 AM
really enjoyed the corruption and feeding on the General. got a bit too 'ooky' with the love stuff I.J.S.
1/17/21, 9:55 PM
You serie was super hot ! made me cum many times !
Martin
1/17/21, 9:23 PM
“Horrible. People are horrible.” So true.
1/17/21, 7:57 PM
shouid do a part two where oliver starts to feel like cals dog