Recent Comments

1/18/21, 8:17 AM
love the way the game change everyone into something different like how Tom became a daddy type.
1/18/21, 7:33 AM
gotacoolname, Thanks, glad you enjoyed. Though this series is mostly random stories that are separate tales, this storyline seems to keep getting comments to continue. Though I'm almost finished with a different story, the Twins will be my project after 😁
1/18/21, 6:07 AM
please please please more!!!!
1/18/21, 5:34 AM
Excellent writing techniques and engaging story telling. You got me by the balls...I want more, please!
1/18/21, 5:31 AM
I actually love this, and I'd love to see how this impacts their daily lives - how they think, act, interact, and dress outside of the sessions, as that wasn't really touched upon.
1/18/21, 3:51 AM
@xerxes Hello again, buddy! yes, I wanted to start this chapter a bit different to avoid the monotony and keep the story fresh. I'm glad you like my characters and how the story is going, and yes, of course, the humiliation keeps coming and coming! I hadn't planned to make him go naked, but it's a good idea! I'll try to add it in the future. Tomorrow is *Lantern Monday*, so get ready for more!
1/18/21, 2:38 AM
Your stories always hit my sweet spot just right Mr. Tiger!
1/18/21, 2:09 AM
This isn't my cup of tea since it's straight and all, but something that stuck out to me has having a lot of potential that I wish you'd gone further with is the questions. Specifically question 3 and them being compelled to truthfully answer a question with false information in it, so they on some level have to accept the lie as truth.
1/18/21, 2:01 AM
Short and sweet - perhaps it's a bit trope-y, but honestly a lot of us are here because we like the tropes! I'd agree with some of the other comments; it would be awesome if you could expand on this (at Puppykix suggested, having Oliver start to feel like Cal's dog could be fun). But, overall, for your first erotica work, this is quite good (certainly better than my first attempt!). Nicely done.
Daniel
1/18/21, 1:35 AM
good stuff. love military corruption stories, the scene on the bottom bunk between Dalton and Eric was hot ! I.J.S.