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Somnus
1/17/21, 12:17 PM
I love how well written this is. Most of the submissions on this site are pretty good but occasionally we are treated to pieces like this that go way beyond. Pieces that are genuine stories. I wanted to learn about the world you've created almost as much as I wanted an elven magic induced orgy to break out! Great stuff :)
Oddballs
1/17/21, 9:48 AM
I'd hate to be critical, but this is your first time. The structure of this story is very basic and the overall plot progress was a little too straightforward. It felt like things fell a bit short and lacking in substance as far as description and details go. On the other hand, I do like that Oliver, the reluctant one, was the one who got to 'top' Cal. And personally, I find direct suck and fuck repetitive and cliche anyway. So I preferred your approach for the climax via dry humping rather than if they were to get naked. As much as I appreciate tasteful nudity as a medium, I must say that entire nakedness in erotica - story, video, picture, etc - is overdone to say the least. So props to you for choosing that route. Smut does not require devoid of clothing. So basic take away - add details, add depth, add description, stay unique. Most importantly, keep writing; we've all been new at this.
1/17/21, 8:58 AM
Good story. With each transformation my thoughts wander to what my wish list of mods would be were I gifted the Chronivac app. To your credit you thought of one that I hadn't but it moves up to the top of my list: "this massive tool would be able to grow a man’s butt to exactly fit his massive penis." I can only guess that had to be written from personal experience. Only another top that has an endowment that doesn't always fit everywhere can appreciate the importance of adding that modification. It's great to drive a big truck but not fun when it doesn't fit in the garage.
1/17/21, 6:24 AM
Great beginning! I look forward to more of this story.
Anonymous
1/17/21, 4:56 AM
I agree. The boys can't end up being Key's slaves.
Anonymous
1/17/21, 4:55 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
1/17/21, 4:01 AM
why don't you continue. the 2 guys need to get even with key. strap him in machine & give him some suggestions !
1/17/21, 3:21 AM
Amazing 10/10 one of the hottest stories I've red in a while. will definitely be saving this one
1/17/21, 3:08 AM
A truly beautiful piece of writing and a great story. Very nice shifting of the perspectives between the wolf and the hunter that sets up the relationship between the two. I don't think there will be mind control in the story; it's more about the bond between the hunter and the wolf-man. I'll be looking forward to the next parts of this fairy tale.
1/17/21, 2:20 AM
Well written and interesting. I'm curious to see how this goes. There's some spelling errors, but still a good read. Definitely looking forward to the next segment! (For example, "waste" is filth. You meant "waist" as about the hips on a body)