really hot story I wonder, is there a prequel about Frankie? I don't seem to find it

Please continue! Hot idea!

hummmm, where are Abdamelek and the rest of the soldiers? I just re-read the first series, and our pharaoh went to sleep with his commander. I am worried for our army.

fuck that was good, love where your mind goes, got a huge load out of this one

@Erratic101 I'll try to include more snapping in future chapters, buddy, I still haven't fully exploited that resource. @EdIam Thank you very much, pal! I'm glad you're enjoying with this story! @Andy You can bet for it! we'll definitely get there, eventually :)

yep that was hot!

This was INCREDIBLE. A perfect dive into a muscle growth and dumbing down story. Seeing the pleasure of being so slow and vapid...damn. Makes me shiver. ;)

loved this chapter. But I do have to agree with one of the other comments about Troy. wish it showed more of the leather master/slave transformations. Bit still a great chapter. still can't wait for the next chapter though.

i know it's most likely a faux pas to come into somebody's comments section and say "i dont like this kink BUT," so i'm sorry for doing that. i mention it only because i feel like it's a tremendous testament to your writing skill that somebody who isn't into age regression still read your story all the way through and genuinely enjoyed it. it did have a certain melancholy to it, as a previous commenter mentioned, but the humiliation and compulsive orgasm elements still hit home. neither side diminished the other, and they were in fact kind of stronger together. the characters were vibrant and had depth to them, i found myself legitimately happy for caleb and adrien coming away from the experience having learned something and having found each other. i didn't read the original version, which i see mentioned in the comments, but i'm so glad caleb kept his interest in art. and the reveal of what he'd been drawing was a lovely scene. and the world of the story (and mrs. p) fascinates me. i'm glad more wasn't explained (stories like this are best, i think, if they keep some mystery) but what was explained was thoroughly satisfying. it could've been enough to just leave it as kinky humiliation punishment, but you went the extra mile and gave excellent reasoning as to why the program is what it is. plus, it really is a trip when the fetish story you read online at almost one in the morning has incredibly well constructed thematic resonance. you are a genuinely wonderful author, and i look forward to any other work you may want to put out (on or off the website). somewhat unrelated, it's interesting, what you mentioned about hot vs vile. i kind of agree. i personally like humiliation stories that have the victim able to move forward happily (and not shattered entirely) at the end, even though they've changed a lot and been at points degraded. and while somebody can still live a happy life without being able to put their thoughts together as well and having been sexually humiliated, permanently losing something creative that was so key to their happiness before seems like it breaks them too much somehow. maybe it's also that hobbies like that aren't cruel (which makes losing them justified) or virtuous (which can be sexy if you like moral degeneration as a kink). they're just... morally neutral pleasant things. anyways. food for thought. sorry for the long diatribe in your comments section, and thanks again for the wonderful story :)

Wow! i am loving this! While power exchange and losing control by consent is one of my favorite fetishes, a transformation/melding of this sort is definitely unsettling. I am feeling quite positive about both the main characters at this point, so I certainly hope that it works out well for both of them. I just can't imagine how at this point, so I really need to stop commenting and read on... Oh, but I do have to thank you for your great imagination and ability to tell a good story!