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1/12/21, 4:52 PM
very nice story so far.....w/ the incubi.....luv it want more T_T
Ganymede
1/12/21, 2:41 PM
Wow! another incredible episode of this incredible story! Good job and well done! Im seeing the Gods personalities come through stronger now - both physical and mental - so im teally pleased. Im also really pleased to see Hera's revenge be passed on! Love that the heroes arent all gay too but some are bisexual. That adds a really interesting element. Looking forward to the rest - especially Apollo and Athena. Two lean, mean and sharp-minded machines. I do hope their paragons are as intelligent and ambitious as their patrons are - over and above sexual ideas or bodies. Grayson (Ganymede from yesterday)
1/12/21, 2:30 PM
My favorite chapter so far! Vivid description!
1/12/21, 1:47 PM
What a charming balance between mindless compulsion (cumpulsion?) and mutual affection. i can imagine Peter as Andy's goofily besotted bodyguard in the next phase of Ohio domination.
1/12/21, 1:30 PM
Clever, clever, clever...not just the writing, which is on par as usual, but the way you've deftly sidestepped bugsex. This is, very likely, the cheeriest Kafka spoof in existence. Awesome stuff.
1/12/21, 12:54 PM
I'm just dying of anxiety for the next chapter, please update!
1/12/21, 12:41 PM
Wow! loved this! hope you have more in store!
1/12/21, 12:10 PM
I would def enjoy the humiliation of Tebow, IRL, so thank you for this great fantasy scenario. Can you please share him with me? Great writing! Keep it up!
1/12/21, 11:25 AM
Would you consider a second one where they go after Joe??
Andy
1/12/21, 8:58 AM
Can't wait till Kyle gets completely humiliated while dressed in his Green Lantern Uniform. Would be fun to have a former straight-laced superhero put on a nice big dildo up his ass within his proud uniform while he goes around being a goody two shoes superhero fighting crime. if only the criminals knew what is wedged in the hero's hole!! Great work! Can't wait for the next part!