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1/12/21, 4:05 AM
What an incredibly hot story! My favorite part was the conversion of Nate. I look forward to more as the aliens take over the world.
nobody
1/12/21, 3:53 AM
the final part about troy felt a bit rushed (when did they speak all the leather into existence? also no detail of the goons twunking down) and there was a typo at "They were wearing leather harnesses, leather tz\hongs, and collars that had leashes attached to them." but other than that nice
Jan 3, 2021
Anonymous
1/12/21, 2:38 AM
Excellent!
1/12/21, 2:20 AM
WOW! Where has this little gem of a story been hiding? The transformation is so vivid and the sex is so hot! The general premise of the worker stealing money from the boss is a bit cliché but i didn't care, the story was so good! I hope you have more like this!
nycboot
1/12/21, 2:14 AM
Oh my! I LOVE THIS! You are an exceptional writer! The description, the pacing - wonderful! I don't think I've encountered this idea on this site before so kudos for that!
1/12/21, 2:00 AM
Yeah i didn't want Tom to get carried away with the wishes. I just wanted him to prevent his bullies from ever bullying another kid again, without Tom becoming a bully himself.
Hahhahh
1/12/21, 1:51 AM
I hope Jacob gets like a high schoolers body or something
1/12/21, 12:56 AM
A few years ago I had a storage unit. Lower level with rows and rows of locked garage style doors. "Oh the stories that could be written" I thought. I was thinking more on the lines of pup cages and drone unit spaces, but if it's two guys turning into sex fiend muscle gods, then so be it. Your writing was so good that before CYCLE ONE saved us from Glenn and Ben, like every annoying "Bro" duo on YouTube, I hated them. And once they transform, I'll like them; or will I?
1/11/21, 11:50 PM
Hot! was hoping it would end with the magister getting bad luck from all three wands