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giveintothemusk
1/11/21, 2:48 AM
Great story!
1/11/21, 2:32 AM
And when I thought thing couldn't get any better!!! Again thank you for a fantastic series! I will be waiting for your next story!
1/11/21, 2:00 AM
Just when I thought it couldn't get better and steamier!!! You are a master in your craft!
1/11/21, 1:58 AM
Again thank you for many sessions filled with erotic fantasies and dirty fun!!!! You have become one of my favorite writers on this site!
1/11/21, 1:55 AM
This story pushes all my buttons!!!! Well written and right into all my kinks and preferences!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
xerxes
1/11/21, 12:53 AM
Excellent story. About to read Chapter 4. Know it will not disappoint. Hope you keep writing.
1/11/21, 12:30 AM
I think I'm getting how the wishes work, the ring needs to be charged, he can't do two things in a roll
Anonymous
1/10/21, 11:19 PM
i think blaine finishes getting total control, uses the couple as slave toys for a bit, then moves on to his next victims after setting the couple up as a permanent revenue source under rylands control. whaddaya think
1/10/21, 10:44 PM
Awesome story bro. Hope there’s more to come!
1/10/21, 10:36 PM
I liked this a lot, it's a fun mechanism for the TF that doesn't focus so much on the 'how'. However, some of the grammar is a little iffy and you switch between 1st and 3rd person a couple times. I just found it a bit distracting while I was reading it. I definitely think if you used a proofreader to tweak the technical aspect, the story would be A+.