Recent Comments

1/10/21, 9:00 PM
I couldn't agree more, this is amazingly hot! I will have blue balls until the next chapter comes out!
Anonymous
1/10/21, 8:57 PM
really like the story and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Daniel
1/10/21, 8:25 PM
fantastic dude, I really dig corruption, surrender, mind control I.J.S.
easdf
1/10/21, 7:55 PM
I admit that the first chapter left me skeptic, something with #dumber just ain't for me, but this chapter was just wow. The idea is unique and the writing is excellent. Gladly I can directly move to the next one :)
Daniel
1/10/21, 7:50 PM
LOVED the Uber addition...hot stuff I.J.S.
Daniel
1/10/21, 7:38 PM
more please sir...I.J.S.
1/10/21, 7:37 PM
Neemie, you had me at the first twitch of their cocks in their pants. This was a super fun, hot little cum-fest and my *only* complaint is that you haven't yet written chapter two when we find out what happens when someone fails to hand off their magic wand in time... it's a little but of Chekhov's Cumshot, and I want to know more!
1/10/21, 7:27 PM
As an Art Historian and lover of Greek Mythology, I am blown away by the beauty ( and sexiness) of this series! Can't wait for new instalments !
nycboot
1/10/21, 5:03 PM
This is a wonderful story. But it's more than that: I'm still trying to figure out what draws me into the emotional core of the victims and Malik. It must be how you endow the characters that makes us empathize with them. To me, that's more important than having a wonderful plot - but you have both. I keep wondering what will the denouement be - will everyone be enslaved but to a different Master? Will Malik be corrupted? How will Ronnie emerge? Really excellent work so far.
Mar 28, 2020
1/10/21, 4:47 PM
would like u to continue more but i agree the transition from straight to gay needs more transition...is too profound & not enough acquisition. meant to b slowly over time instead of one dose.....