Recent Comments

1/10/21, 10:44 PM
Awesome story bro. Hope there’s more to come!
1/10/21, 10:36 PM
I liked this a lot, it's a fun mechanism for the TF that doesn't focus so much on the 'how'. However, some of the grammar is a little iffy and you switch between 1st and 3rd person a couple times. I just found it a bit distracting while I was reading it. I definitely think if you used a proofreader to tweak the technical aspect, the story would be A+.
1/10/21, 9:23 PM
... I returned to this story. The title includes the word ... "cursed". Holy hot.
1/10/21, 9:21 PM
Wow. You have provided an effective real mystery giving only teasing plot developments. You left me truly hanging in the end in believing the jock-boy skinny dude really just needed some help from his frat bullies. I've aged this boy to 21 in any event to give it some depth of a college scene... perhaps the father broke into the frat house. I do this just to give this some age. All damn good.
1/10/21, 9:10 PM
I love this, and hope to see more soon!
1/10/21, 9:00 PM
I couldn't agree more, this is amazingly hot! I will have blue balls until the next chapter comes out!
Anonymous
1/10/21, 8:57 PM
really like the story and I'm excited to see where it goes!
Daniel
1/10/21, 8:25 PM
fantastic dude, I really dig corruption, surrender, mind control I.J.S.
easdf
1/10/21, 7:55 PM
I admit that the first chapter left me skeptic, something with #dumber just ain't for me, but this chapter was just wow. The idea is unique and the writing is excellent. Gladly I can directly move to the next one :)
Daniel
1/10/21, 7:50 PM
LOVED the Uber addition...hot stuff I.J.S.