Recent Comments

Daniel
1/9/21, 8:18 PM
this would make a great mini-series on HERE TV wonderful narrative and characters I.J.S.
Apr 17, 2020
Daniel
1/9/21, 8:09 PM
love hypnosis, gimme more please I.J.S.
General Guy
1/9/21, 7:25 PM
Thank you guys for all your feedback! I'm so glad you're enjoying the series so far. Theres a lot of stuff ahead that I hope you like just as much. About the transformations matching the physical/mental attributes of the gods: it is an idea I'm trying to convey a bit better. Each champion will represent the needs of the god according to the story, but I'll take it into consideration and work my way with it. And about Marcus: the point was more to convey what Zeus's arrogance can do to a soul. Zeus acted out of impulse many times, and this time it happened that a guy reminded him vaguely of Ganymede and chose him for it. Thanks for the feedback it is always more than welcome!
1/9/21, 7:02 PM
AWESOME. Combines my love of Greek mythology and muscle transformation, the writing is great, and the plot is fascinating. I read every word and not once was I tempted to skip ahead to "the good part." It was all the good part!
Dec 29, 2020
1/9/21, 5:58 PM
Pressed my buttons. Esp'ily the one that counts. Thanks.
1/9/21, 4:57 PM
i really liked this one. For Marcus I didn't really get to see what made him worthy of being a champion, and the first thing he does is abuse his power over his former friends. For Gabriel we were able to see him be voracious couragous, selfless, and fun. It felt like he earned the right to be a champion. Looking forward to more of that for the rest.
Whatalooker
1/9/21, 4:07 PM
Excellent writing! What a story! Wow!
Ganymede
1/9/21, 3:55 PM
PS. I really love your new modernisation and interpretation of Greek Myth!
Ganymede
1/9/21, 3:38 PM
Awesome! Spectacular! Incredible! This is by far the best story Ive ever read and the inclusion of greek mythology makes it even better! Just a suggestion - base the physical transformations of each paragon on the characteristics - physical and mental - of the god. So Zeus or Dionysus' champion might be more wild, prone to vice and hairy than the gods of civilisation and widsom Apollo or Athena (smooth, orderly and controlled). Otherwise fantastic!