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1/8/21, 2:00 PM
so hot man, thank you!
1/8/21, 1:55 PM
Very hot
1/8/21, 1:38 PM
Very hot! I was just hoping we'd get more scenes of John and Rod reinforcing each other's programming to squat and masturbate.
1/8/21, 1:10 PM
I imagine Tim's in for quite the surprise when Mikael gets home, especially if Seth's dildo is still in his pussy. I think changing "Sir" to "sir" as Jack/Seth's control begins to sink in would be a subtle way of signaling the power change that happens just as subtly for Mikael. Your views of the church aren't extreme, and I applaud the mention of Kant and Seth's distinction between beings of evil v beings of chaos. I especially liked the way Seth chose to use his new recruit to be a force for change rather than just making him a dumb himbo devoted to demon dick.
1/8/21, 12:39 PM
like your stories, continue the good work. can't wait to see the transformations that may lie ahead.....
1/8/21, 12:25 PM
please continue this so good & hot.....UwU
JRL
1/8/21, 11:17 AM
So. Fucking. Hot. you are an amazing writer. Love what you're going for here. Keep it (and me) coming please!
1/8/21, 10:26 AM
The story idea was not bad. I liked the idea of revenge through hypnosis though the long term enactment of the plan stretched the bonds of "suspension of belief" and the exposition could have been shorter. I did especially like where the protagonist lost control of the revenge plot for a bit of time but thought the description of the sex could have been hotter. All in all, while the story lost a bit by the focus being on making sure the reader understood all the steps taken to in act the revenge and the motivation, instead of the sex itself, I would give it a thumbs up.
Anonymous
1/8/21, 9:49 AM
This was awesome! I'd love to see what happens with the dad. Please make more.
1/8/21, 9:14 AM
Can't wait for more, really great story