Recent Comments

1/8/21, 12:39 PM
like your stories, continue the good work. can't wait to see the transformations that may lie ahead.....
1/8/21, 12:25 PM
please continue this so good & hot.....UwU
JRL
1/8/21, 11:17 AM
So. Fucking. Hot. you are an amazing writer. Love what you're going for here. Keep it (and me) coming please!
1/8/21, 10:26 AM
The story idea was not bad. I liked the idea of revenge through hypnosis though the long term enactment of the plan stretched the bonds of "suspension of belief" and the exposition could have been shorter. I did especially like where the protagonist lost control of the revenge plot for a bit of time but thought the description of the sex could have been hotter. All in all, while the story lost a bit by the focus being on making sure the reader understood all the steps taken to in act the revenge and the motivation, instead of the sex itself, I would give it a thumbs up.
Anonymous
1/8/21, 9:49 AM
This was awesome! I'd love to see what happens with the dad. Please make more.
1/8/21, 9:14 AM
Can't wait for more, really great story
1/8/21, 9:00 AM
Damn, this was so hot. Please keep this series up. Absolutely loved it!!!
BPtime
1/8/21, 8:34 AM
I particularly like the hot house atmosphere of the story. Will there be more playmates?
Daniel
1/8/21, 5:46 AM
Terrifically hot, sexy story...this author’gets’ the lurid pleasures of struggle, corruption and acceptance. I.J.S. MORE PLEASE!
1/8/21, 5:09 AM
great start.....would love to c what happens next.....LOL UwU